Draft of Rhetorical Analysis

In this post I will be sharing my first draft of Project 2 based on the article "Sound Check" by John Schwartz which was published in The New York Times. I think I have done a fairly decent job writing this but I would ask my peer reviewers to look out for the flow of my project. Does everything flow together well? Or should I rearrange it somehow? I have solidified my arguments and have support but I'm curious to know if there is a better way of organizing it.

You can access my Project 2 Draft by clicking here.

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