You can access my paragraph analysis exercise with this link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/157vEEO2mMar3hXC5x9lVtVRYVaGLzZHXpsBnv69hfaw/edit?usp=sharing
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Friday, September 18, 2015
Paragraph Analysis
I am writing this post based on the exercise I just completed, where I wrote comments for each of my paragraphs in my Quick Reference Guide. This exercise was especially helpful in aiding me in narrowing down the sections that needed the most work. I realized in my support section there was seriously lacking some analysis and support. I would say my critics side is pretty strong. I think I can add another section about the different MFA programs offered and more detail about the courses and purpose. Now when I go back to my final draft I have a clearer picture of what I want to change and edit based off of not only my peers' comments but this exercise as well.
You can access my paragraph analysis exercise with this link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/157vEEO2mMar3hXC5x9lVtVRYVaGLzZHXpsBnv69hfaw/edit?usp=sharing
You can access my paragraph analysis exercise with this link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/157vEEO2mMar3hXC5x9lVtVRYVaGLzZHXpsBnv69hfaw/edit?usp=sharing
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Hi Chloe! I was looking at your copy of your draft but I don't see any comments in the margins. Is that a mistake or are you just not done with it yet? I just figured I should let you know before this is due, just in case!
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